Today I released my FIRST ORIGINAL song ever and I wanted to share it with you :) It's the first song that I fully composed, produced, wrote and sang on !
Let me know if you have any feedback so I can improve next time, but in the meantime, I hope you enjoy the vibes 💫
Good feeling song overall. I would say hammer the hook/title more in the chorus. For example...
You make me feel like there's nobody else Everyday you're all I think about You make me feel like .... Love you so bad wouldn't change a thing Yea, you make me feel...
Also, rhyming in that chorus would really strengthen it to make it more hooky in that way. Just something to think about. There are a variety of ways to approach that chorus but I did want to hear the hook repeat! Really great job overall. It's a lot of work from start to finish, so kudos on completing the song!
@Devin James For sure !! Thank you for your feedback. I definitely had more trouble on the hook and that would be a great idea to do it this way :) I will keep it in mind for the next one, thanks again :D
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