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Max Mus
Jul 27, 2021
Hi everyone!)
I'm interested in your opinion about my track.
I want to improve my skills and your criticism will be one of the best ways to do it.
Please, write not only about music composing, but also about mixing and mastering.

Thank you in advance for your opinion.)
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Max Mus
Jul 27, 2021
M?)
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Kaleb Stock
Jul 27, 2021
Hey Max, I like what you've done here. The arrangement seems to fit well and the instrumentation all fits well together. Great work in my opinion!
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Max Mus
Jul 27, 2021
Thank you , Kaleb.) Any thoughts how to make it better?)
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Al Barnard
Jul 27, 2021
Sounding good, man. A few ideas here: have you considered periodically harmonizing that main guitar riff up a third? That might bring out a cool effect. Also, I think it'd be neat if you had a section in which the drums were half-time, with the synths brought out a bit more. You could create a very spacy feel to solo over.
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Max Mus
Jul 28, 2021
Al Barnard, I think rising harmony by a third could be out of style.
But adding section with slowed down drums could be nice) And it could be done in Justin Timberlake's "Suit & Tie" intro style.)
Thank you, man)
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שרה בן פורת
Jul 28, 2021
Flowing and pleasing to the ear I liked very well😍
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Max Mus
Aug 03, 2021
שרה בן פורת, thank you)